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FLIGHT

Posted by anthonynorth on April 11, 2008

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YOU KNOW IT’S THE WRITE WAY

FLIGHT

He ran. The streets seemed a blur around him. The dark had descended some time ago, and he had no idea where he was going. Not in this physical reality of running, or in the recesses of his mind.
He never dreamt the panic that can come through such a flight. Maybe it rhymes with fright for a reason?

The chain of events had been set in motion by himself.

And in his mind’s eyes he saw the person, as if in shadows, undefined. Why had he done it? And why, now, was he so afraid?
Certainly, if he went back, felt compelled to finish the task, his life could never be the same again. If caught, as was inevitable if he went back, it was a new life awaiting him – a life confined.
Slowly, the streets seemed to slow down. This seemed strange, for it was as if it was not him slowing down, but reality taking a grip on his mind, and pulling him up. And as so often happens when we flee, he found himself stopping where he began, outside the restaurant.
Life is like that – sending us in circles of indecision. He saw her sat at the table, as invited. Swallowing hard, he entered, walked up to her, went down on one knee, and said: ‘Will you marry me?’

© Anthony North, April 2008

PARANOID

He sat in silence, his life so fickle,
his mind so confused and brittle;
Who was the skunk who’d got him annoyed,
taking his picture with that Polaroid,
making his life so null and void?

Life from now on was a conspiracy,
forever wondering if it was him or he;
The future wasn’t worth a pinch of salt,
everything coming to such a halt,
his mind now going with a sudden jolt

So for ever after he was paranoid,
leaving the life he had so enjoyed;
They were out to get him, no matter what the toil,
taking his fears right to the boil,
and upon his head, aluminium foil

(c) Anthony North, April 2008

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CHANCE ENCOUNTER

What do we mean when we say we have had a chance encounter? Do we mean that something has occurred, totally unexpected, and totally out of our control? This is the implication, but can such an event really be so random?
By ‘chance’ we mean an element of the universe where things simply happen. Statistically, we try to devise odds on such happenings, and when they occur, we usually class them as coincidences. But I’m not satisfied it is as simple as that.
Okay, it can be. A car can come out of nowhere and kill you. A person can enter your world out of the blue, and fall in love. But so many elements of life are more complicated that mere chance.
We have ancient sciences such as Astrology to place order upon the chaos of chance, as if there is some predestination in our lives. And whilst I don’t accept this simple system of destiny, such a ‘system’ can be found in our psychology.
We are the result of our genetics and our experiences. Slowly, life shapes us into the people we are. And along that path, we make specific choices, devise specific ideas, and these influences play their part in our lives.
Hence, when we suddenly find ourselves in this place, with that attitude, and a chance encounter occurs, we should remember that it is OUR lives that led to that point, our own mentality tinkering with the possibilities of chance.
So for better or worse, ‘chance’ is a bit of a cop-out. The thing that destined us to be there was ourselves.

© Anthony North, April 2008

36 Responses to “FLIGHT”

  1. What fun your poem was to read. Its kind of sad to see that he grew paranoid and was afraid of living. Its hard not to think someone is out to get you if something has happened to you in life, though. Also, I love how you incorporated the use of chance into the mix and then suggested that we are the ones responsible for chance happening.

  2. Hi Michelle,
    Thanks for that. We tend to be living in a more and more paranoid society today. There’s even a connection between the poem and essay, in that we damn chance when things go wrong. Maybe that’s why my message here is so important.

  3. whypaisley said

    first off i want to say i so wanted to go the route of the people that put foil on their heads to reflect alien rays and messages and the such… what fun!!!!!

    excellent piece in total anthony… but i do so hope predestination is not the only way……

  4. Hi Paisley,
    Many thanks. I’m surprised foil hats haven’t taken off as a fashion accessory, bearing in mind the general level of paranoia today :-)
    As for predestination, despite my views, there is never, ever, just one way of looking at things.

  5. Scott said

    Your poem brought memories of Mel Gibson’s movie ‘Conspiracy Theory’! The aluminum foil had is a good idea, you know! You never if or when………..:-) Thanks for sharing it, I enjoyed the read!

  6. Hi Scott,
    Thanks for that. I enjoy the odd conspiracy theory myself. Mostly rubbish, of course.

  7. good varied post, fun to read

  8. A head spinning page of thought and activity! Great job! I like the idea of predestination for things soured and self-will for those so perfect!

  9. Hi Crafty Green Poet,
    Thanks for that. Much appreciated.

    Hi Tumblewords,
    Many thanks. Yes, it is strange how, as we glory the individual, so many try to shirk responsibility for their actions.

  10. watermaid said

    There’s such a lot I could comment on here. So what about our chance of winning the lottery? Mine is zero, incidentally as I’ve never bought a ticket. So much of life seem to be built on chance as a hope. I liked your salutary reminder that wherever we are, we are the ones who got ourselves there.

  11. Hi Watermaid,
    I do, of course, concede that some things are obviously down to chance, such as the random fall of lottery balls. But as you say, we do need to realise that, often, the situations we find ourselves in are down to ourselves.

  12. Your poem is great! The allusion to foil on the head at the end is very witty. There really are people who do that. Life is always stranger than art.

  13. ratanaong said

    I like the suspence that you build up in your story. Interesting that marriage is seen as a “life confined”. Overall, I like your expressive post.

  14. Just Jen said

    how romantic!
    My proposal wasn’t that nice at all…LOL

  15. Loved your observation of “flight” and “fright” rhyming. Great thought connection!

    But your “Paranoid” poem really is dynamic. When ou spoke of “aluminium foil” on the head, I immediately thought of ancient times when people would allow scented pomanders to melt on their head to hide body odour. I know, quite mad!

    Gemma

  16. You are getting too good at rhyming! I love your way of looking at things. And yes, there can never be only one way. There are many. For that we need to keep our eyes and ears open.

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  17. Jadey said

    Your posts are wonderful I really enjoyed each and every one of them.

  18. Good morning Mariacristina,
    Thanks for that. Yes, life IS stranger than art – mainly because if you told it right in fiction, no one would believe it!

    Hi Ratanaong,
    In a way, sharing a life is a ‘confinement’, in that you then have another to think about. Everything must take this into account. But it is voluntary, of course, and can be so nice.

    Hi Just Jen,
    There is an infinite number of ways to propose. From my experience, though, those that are planned never work out the way they’re supposed to :-)

    Hi Gemma,
    Thanks for that. A mad poem will naturally generate mad thoughts :-)
    That’s good.

    Hi Gautami,
    Many thanks for your kind words. Yes, I often write about just one way of looking at something, but it’s just a view, an opinion – I’m aware of infinite variety – and it’s marvellous!

    Hi Jadey,
    You are too kind. But much appreciated.

  19. What a great mix you produced here! I just loved the poem. Your rhyming words are so well chosen.

  20. Hi Keith,
    Thanks for that. I do love providing variation in these magazine posts.

  21. Shubd said

    Hi Anthony

    Thanks for your visit and appreciation of the picture and the poem “Flight” .

    Loved your little story ..very unusual :) The poem was great too .

    I do agree that Life is mostly of our making . But when that thing called “Chance” does makes its presence felt .. it causes enough ripples to change the world of our making !!

  22. Hi Shubd,
    Welcome, and thanks for that. Yes, there is pure chance, as I concede in the essay, but all too often we use it where it doesn’t really apply.

  23. Love the foil at the end! Good job using those five words!

  24. jeques said

    Anthony,

    I like your thorough analysis of chance encounter in this article, you gave it much clarity by looking at it in many different angles like disecting something so every part of it is defined, and I agree to the ideas presented.

    The short piece on flight and the poem paranoid gave this article as a whole dimensions. The variety of read in one is always a treat to your readers.

    I wish you well.

    ~ Jeques

  25. Hi Linda,
    Thanks for that. I felt quite paranoid myself after writing that :-)

    Hi Jeques,
    Many thanks. You do a fair job at variety on your blog, too.

  26. Hi Anthony, a great read as usual…

  27. Marcia said

    The proposal surprised me, but I loved it. Sometimes I think I must have foil hidden beneath my hair… as for destiny, Anthony, I believe we are responsible and do control our own for the most part, but we don’t control that of others – and that leads to interesting “chance” encounters.

  28. Constance said

    Hey, sometimes the tin foil hat people seem to have the right idea!

  29. I enjoyed the proposal – made me wonder how many men actually go through this indecision right up to the moment of no return. Your chance encounter was very interesting, although some of us like to believe their is a greater power that can step in make right the stuff we messed up and put us on a better path. Maybe that greater power is in us all along.

  30. Hi Andy,
    Thanks for that. I’m pleased you enjoyed it.

    Hi Marcia,
    Indeed, some chance encounters we can’t avoid – but certainly not all, which is the point I’m making. If the flash fiction surprised you, I’ve done the job right :-)

    Hi Constance,
    I guess I disagree with you there. At least, that’s what the aliens told me to say :-)

    Hi Cricket’s Hearth,
    Thanks for that. I think most people have moments of indecision before such a commitment. I’d say if they didn’t, they are not really understanding what they’re getting into.
    As for a ‘greater power’ behind chance, quite possibly. As I often repeat, I only put my own personal opinions here, and I’m quite aware I could well be wrong.

  31. Rambler said

    I agree with paisley…the idea of sticking out an aluminum foil on the head intrigues me :)

  32. Hi Rambler,
    We should all do it together ….
    … no, no no! Shut up, aliens :-)

  33. rel said

    Anthony,
    It is surely a treat to read the stories your mind conjures up!
    rel

  34. Hi Rel,
    Many thanks for those kind words. Much appreciated.

  35. Selma said

    I can so relate to the piece on ‘Flight.’ I had to discuss something serious with a friend of mine not long ago and beforehand I just wanted to run. I liked your happy ending.

  36. Hi Selma,
    I suppose the real courageous people are those who acknowledge their fears, and their natural reactions to them.

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