HOW NOT TO WRITE #1
Posted by anthonynorth on May 5, 2008
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YOU KNOW IT’S THE WRITE WAY
WOODEN
We live our lives, but is it true,
the way we behave, me and you?
Do we have the choices to make,
or is it just one big fake?
We live in a world of consumer choice,
but images of this and that, they foist
upon our minds to get us to buy,
this and that, you can’t deny;
Things are made for ever and ever,
risking nature’s splendid endeavour;
providing for our every need,
or is it just our insatiable greed?
But have you noticed we’ve become all the same,
society and people becoming lame,
with wooden lives and wooden hopes,
Oh, we really have become dopes,
with wooden needs that affect our health,
and wooden ambition grounded in wealth,
as we’re all left on, the wooden shelf
(c) Anthony North, May 2008
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A TRANSFORMING PEN
Variations of just four letters make up the entire genetic code of DNA. Everything that can be in terms of biology – the total diversity of life – is captured in so few little letters. But life is more than DNA. It is also mind.
And mind is expressed best through variations of the letters in the alphabet. In the English alphabet, that is 26. So just imagine how much greater the variety there is at the writer’s fingertips?
From pen to keypad, writers transform what is in the mind, to paper or screen. A unique alchemy occurs, making thoughts real. But the writing process does not end there.
No, it is far more magnificent.
Looking at the history of the world, whenever a major transformation occurs, you can usually find a book. From the Bible, to Marx’s Das Kapital, to Newton’s Principia, transformation is the result of literary endeavour, whether good or bad.
They say the pen is mightier than the sword. Nothing is more true. And as writers, we belong to the most noble of crafts. So as we write, we should remember this, and be happy in our endeavour. For we deal with the true code of life.
© Anthony North, May 2008
TRANSFORMATION
You think it through, you write it out,
a majestic craft, there is no doubt;
a person will read, planting a seed
of change that will never recede;
His actions are imbued by your word,
coming first, and never second or third;
Your thoughts are out in society,
made real, made true, growing just like a tree;
the thought branches out, noble and great,
defining other people’s fate,
as through your mind, your pen, your quill,
you transmit, to all, your will,
as your noble craft,
you do fulfil
(c) Anthony North, May 2008
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IN SEARCH OF HAPPINESS
To be happy is the goal of us all. But is this a viable state? Indeed, is it really what being human is about? Or does the state of happiness just allow us to be complacent about things?
Looking to human history it seems clear to me that things only change when people are frustrated. This is, of course, a state of unhappiness, and drives change. Hence, you could say that the process of social evolution requires us not to be happy.
This seems a depressing picture, indeed.
However, it need not be. Existence is not only about our advancement. It is also about our contentment. And whilst this is counter to things in terms of society and history, it is certainly achieveable in love.
Love seems to provide stability in happiness. It is nurturing, and as long as complacency doesn’t enter the picture, it is the engine of family life, a definite counter-balance to the ravages of society and history. So this thing called happiness seems to be a multi-faceted thing.
Indeed, I think we can even be happy with our frustrations. I’ve written before that it is often a journey in life that is more important than its conclusion. For once complete, what then?
We are, as a species, curious about everything. We have a desire to know, and in wanting to know, we are driven on, thus confirming social evolution, and being happy with our frustrations.
© Anthony North, May 2008
THE FAR SPACE EXPERIENCE
Blast off! Gravity building! Face contorting!
It felt like death,
as we broke out of the world and floated,
high above the planet.
I looked down, watching the world from up high,
as if disconnected, as if some other being,
as if I would never see this planet again.
Power on! Engines engaged!
5
4
3
2
1
The hyper drive rocketed us through …
… what?
Was it space? Not as we know it.
Was it existence? Am I here to tell?
They said it was a wormhole, the theorists,
but to me it was like a tunnel, pressing upon me,
dark as dark can be,
as if I was dead
And slowly, amazingly, omnipresently, the light.
Did it question why I was here?
Did it make me look back upon my life?
Did it decide if I could go on or not?
Or was it me?
Stillness! Brightness! Omniscience!
It was a sun, or it was a particle,
or maytbe a super-string;
or maybe it was nothing at all;
or maybe it was God Himself,
but I had had my far space experience,
and it beckoned me on, to existence anew,
safe in the knowledge that I’d exist forever,
but never, again, visit the ones I love,
lest they come this way, too
(c) Anthony North, May 2008
May 5, 2008 at 1:02 pm
“How Not To Write”? Surly a misnomer if ever there was one.
May 5, 2008 at 1:08 pm
the never ending variety is what always impresses me on your site… how can you tackle and intermingle so many topics at once??? you are far better at multi tasking than i am…. wonderful post all the way around……
May 5, 2008 at 1:16 pm
Hi Brian,
You’re so kind.
The title is dedicated to all the mainstream publishers who’ve told me so. And there’s a lot of them.
Hi Paisley,
Many thanks for those kind words. I’ve had quite a few jobs juggling this and that. I think that experience might have helped here.
May 5, 2008 at 1:31 pm
I like this space poem! It’s interesting that you chose not to rhyme at the beginning when everything is questionable but, at the end, you throw in a little rhyme, like saying things are back on track. Cool!
May 5, 2008 at 2:18 pm
Hi Linda,
Thanks for that. I tried to place several meanings in that poem, in particular relating a ’space’ event to the near death experience.
May 5, 2008 at 3:20 pm
I wish, I knew your way of how not to write!
May 5, 2008 at 3:30 pm
Hi Gautami,
Well, I’ll try not to teach you
(As if YOU need any lessons!)
May 5, 2008 at 6:24 pm
Another very varied post, i particularly enjoyed the SF poem, I like the uncertainty in it.
May 5, 2008 at 8:56 pm
Indeed, writing is “the most noble of crafts.” But the craft of writing implies a reader, and this is where today’s culture falls short. We’ve lost the ability to read well, which means we tend to read that which isn’t written well. In my own little way I’m determined to bring some of the classics back into the classroom.
May 5, 2008 at 10:17 pm
Hi Crafty Green Poet,
Many thanks. It’s only the second time I’ve tried a Sci Fi poem, but quite enjoyed doing it.
Hi John Ryan,
I agree with you totally. And one of the primary problems is the mainstream publishing industry. Once they used to nurture writers, allowing up to two or three failures, sure in the knowledge that eventually it would be right - and making their money back by then selling the ones that seemed to fail.
Now, quick profit is all that counts. Hence, books become formulaic and unimaginative. And usually from ‘celebrities’ who’ve done the publicity for them.
May 5, 2008 at 11:06 pm
I agree with paisley - you are very good at gathering many disparate elements.
Each one of your poems and insights deserves a comment, since they all provoked thought. But for now I’ll respond to THe Far Space Experience
To me this poem read like a near-death experience. Beautiful, yes, but also sad in the event that loved ones don’t travel the same path. The end left a lot of mystery to ponder.
A wonderful post!
May 5, 2008 at 11:18 pm
You’ve a well rounded post here. I think people are very much set in their way and change is difficult to process in that state of mind. I believe you are right when you say everyone needs to be unhappy before society can move its furniture around. Have a nice night.
May 6, 2008 at 5:34 am
Well-considered as always. It is nice to regard ourselves - the writers - as being able to wield a weapon more mighty than the sword. Maybe our pens can effect a change in this crazy world.
May 6, 2008 at 7:16 am
Hi Mariacristina,
Many thanks. Your words are appreciated.
Yes the poem was based on the near death experience, and left a mystery at the end, but also a touch of rhyme, suggesting some form of order to it.
Hi Michelle,
Thanks for that. Yes, I don’t see people making massive changes unless they are a touch unhappy.
Hi Selma,
I’m convinced writers have, not so much a ‘power’, but an influence. And it is this - the ability to imagine and define change - that spurs people on, I’m sure.
May 6, 2008 at 7:58 am
Yes! Indeed love is the engine of family life. But, like most engines, needs some “oiling” sometmes in every sense!
Gemma
May 6, 2008 at 8:13 am
Hi Gemma,
I can’t disagree with that. Very true!
May 6, 2008 at 2:32 pm
on the subject of happiness,, we as humans cannot hold on to happiness,, that which we are convinced will be the stepping stone to happiness, once achieved,, pales,, and yet another so called stepping stone arises.. it is a viscous circle,, but one i have no remedy for,, accept to accept that which you are,, or have been given… and that i know is always easier said than done!!
heres my two for tuesdays response: good girls
May 6, 2008 at 2:42 pm
Hi Paisley,
Yes, I think we’re hard-wired to be like this. Indeed, it makes sure the frustrations I speak of will always rise.
I’m not saying it is a natural state, but a consequence of having emotion.
May 7, 2008 at 12:13 am
…excellent post an… consumerism is a frightening concept we have adopted here in america… to a t you have captured my thoughts… as little as i know of writing… i feel so much better as a writer… i think of mick jagger’s i can’t get no satisfaction.. and then thrz existentialism.. ah, contentment in moments of time.. hmm. light and death holding hands… and you decided to come back.. yes, no… just thoughts passin thru as i read your post…
May 7, 2008 at 1:06 am
OMY Gosh… you are awesome. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poems. Thank you for reading mine!
May 7, 2008 at 7:11 am
Hi Pieceofpie,
And most of those thoughts make absolute sense to me
Hi Christina,
Welcome, and thanks for the kind comment. It is much appreciated.
May 8, 2008 at 8:46 am
Science, fiction, and science fiction, plus a free meal!! (Food for thought). Good stuff.
May 8, 2008 at 9:07 am
Hi Stan,
Thanks for that. Glad you enjoyed them.
May 9, 2008 at 11:51 pm
Hi Anthony, another loaded post.. Sometimes I lose sight of happiness as a journey, I can only see it as a conclusion - a sort of ‘when you’re happy you die’ - attitude. But I like the way you explain it. Being happy with your frustrations etc.
May 10, 2008 at 7:38 am
Hi SweetTalkingGuy,
Thanks for that. Yes, we’d like everythintg to be perfect, but as soon as it is, we get bored. I think we’re hard-wired to be frustrated, and it is usually then that we excel.
May 12, 2008 at 2:33 pm
What a balancing act. I don’t know how you do it. I did not do all the poem posts. I am going on vacation the end of this week. Be back soon.
May 12, 2008 at 2:38 pm
Hi Beloved Dreamer,
Thanks for that. Have a good holiday.