UNIVERSE
Posted by anthonynorth on June 6, 2010
Theme Thursday, Microfiction Monday & ABC Wednesday
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GURU TONY
Welcome to my weekly magazine post. Watch
it grow thru the week. You can opt to read the essay,
current affairs, themed mini mag with fiction & poetry, or just
read the lot. Here’s hoping you enjoy your visit. Plenty
for everyone here so do call again next week.
MICROFICTION
Fiction: The mirror didn’t lie. The geneticist
had always been an ass, but he’d love to know
which gene produced the long ears.
UNIVERSE
Is the universe out there? It certainly seems to be – after all, we feel
its effects all the time; and science certainly seems to be learning lots
about it. But is this really the case? Well, most of the mass of the
universe is currently classed as dark energy or dark matter – mainly
because we haven’t the slightest idea of how it works without
inventing something yet to be found. It’s the same with Big Bang. It all
began with the expansion of a singularity. Yet this singularity is nothing
more than a mathematical point of infinity. In reality, our understanding
of the universe has moved on very little since the days of gods holding
it in place. Indeed, the history of our knowledge of the universe seems
to go hand in hand with our changing view of our culture and society.
So maybe the true reality of the universe exists only in our collective
minds.
CANDY
Fiction: When the health evangelist realised
society had a weight problem he decided
Candy was to blame. But the authorities
decided changing it to Dontdy was a
little extreme.
Eye On the World
Essays on everything from science
to religion, politics to crime
EURO NEWS: Eurovision Song
Contest. The team that made Kylie
come last. They’ll come in top 5? They
should be so lucky.
BRIT NEWS: Lib Dem govt minister David Laws quits
over £40,000 payment to partner in expenses scandal. At
least it’s not Tory sleaze.
BRIT NEWS: Survey says average Brit family spend 49 mins together
per week. Such are the pressures of modern life to keep us apart.
WORLD NEWS: Are US govt talking to Hamas secretly, as their leader
claims? Possibly. At some level everyone talks to everyone.
BRIT NEWS: Govt could face European court if it doesn’t give
prisoners the vote. Rubbish! In committing crime they
forego that right.
BRIT NEWS: Cameron wants more openness in govt.
Of course he’d say that, but openness always
leans towards the good news than bad.
BRIT NEWS: Some 180 civil servants earn
more than the Prime Minister. Another
example of ridiculous overspend
of ‘prudent’ Brown.
READ WITH MUMMY
The Magazine Post with a gentle hint of horror
One Single Impression
Sunday Scribblings – Friday Flash 55
Three Word Wednesday – Thursday Poets’ Rally
Writer’s Island
OUBLIETTE
Pushed down the hatch into the pit,
Never get out, no matter how fit,
As time drags on it’s a forgotten place,
What happens is surely a terrible disgrace …
So many years since I imprisoned him there,
I daren’t go and look – his eye sockets will stare,
Reminding me of a terror let free,
Skeletons of mind too fearful to see
FLASH 55 – THE SCHOOL
Fiction: It was certainly an unusual boarding school. The teachers were
very good and cost nothing at all. Of course, the headmaster was
pleased with his recruiting methods. He often trawled ‘up there’ during
his séances. After all, there were plenty just floating about, doing
nothing. And the kiddies always stayed in bed on a night.
UNFORGETTABLE
Unforgettable – that’s her song,
She obviously thought we belonged,
Followed me everywhere I went,
Eventually my anger I had to vent,
I lie awake, now, most of the time,
Trying to hear that damn clock chime,
How she died – such a fright,
Now she sings that song all night
THE NOBLE UNDEAD
Fiction: Since he was last staked the noble undead one had declined in
people’s imagination. A new world was coming. Science was advancing,
and how could superstition survive this onslaught of reason? And
without superstition he could not take bodily form again, his memory
condemned to be hidden from culture. For he lived on fear, and if
people no longer knew how to fear … ? He thought long and hard about
this as he roamed through the ether. One day he found himself in a
book filled study, and it occurred to him that imagination now existed
in words; and if imagination was there, why not fear? He looked at the
man sat at the desk and made his decision. He entered through his ear
and soon found a comfy place within his mind to think. And as the man
called Stoker began to write, the undead one knew he would rise once
more.
MESS
A scene of carnage, such a mess,
I look down feeling such distress,
Serial killers, ghosts and ghouls performed,
This charnel house is not the norm,
It’s so hard not to step on all the gore,
I’ve dropped my horror DVDs on the floor
BRIT NEWS: Union says British
Airways face a summer of disruption.
With strikes and ash, being hit hard. BA &
BP – are they on way out?
BRIT NEWS: Is UK doing enough to protect major sites
during Olympics? Most likely not; which is the problem. You
can’t have 100% security.
CRIME NEWS: After 12 shot dead by Cumbrian spree killer there’ll
no doubt be a kneejerk reaction to gun laws again. Always leads to
bad law.
GREEN NEWS: UN report says we should eat less meat/dairy products
to ease climate change. Abstinance never good message. It’s ignored.
HEALTH NEWS: Council of Europe says some experts who urged
stockpiling of swine flu vaccine been paid by Big Pharma.
Why am I not surprised?
BRIT NEWS: MP urges local councils to publish spending
over £500. Very good idea. So much wastage
here there’d be riots in the streets.
© Anthony North, June 2010
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Brian said
The more I read about science the more I realize that the universe is probably a painted dome with holes punched through for light.
anthonynorth said
Hi Brian,
A good point. Mindst you, this would make it part of a multiverse, as we’re left with where the light and paint came from 🙂
Nessa said
After reading Universe, I think, once again, that science is just like religion.
anthonynorth said
Hi Nessa,
Definitely a different initial methodology, but, yes, I’m convinced it then formulates just like religion.
Stan Ski said
You know what they say about donkeys 😉
All the ‘men of the world’ would struggle to explain the Universe.
We had a teacher who we nicknamed ‘The Ghost’ because of his lengthy, unexplained absences.
I’ve never needed to use an alarm clock, however early I have to rise.
anthonynorth said
Hi Stan,
Some very true words there 🙂
That’s one interesting teacher.
Carina said
I see that you found the mysteries of the oubliette more interesting than the common pride of Icarus. Understandable! But what will you do next week? =)
anthonynorth said
Hi Carina,
Ah, I do a weekly post, so I’m well ahead. Icarus is on my previous post.
SandyCarlson said
The microfiction had me laughing. A fun version of an updated Frankenstein! Great stuff, Anthony.
anthonynorth said
Hi Sandy,
Thanks for that. Glad you liked it 🙂
Loch Rob said
Anthony, I like you poem OUBLIETTE. It has a dark sinister feel. Well crafted.
I too enjoyed the microfiction. All smiles this morning.
anthonynorth said
Hi Rob,
Many thanks. I like doing dark now and again.
Gerardine Baugh said
I started reading at the top and then had a good laugh from your MICROFICTION. Thank you for posting. After I comment I can come back and finish reading:-)
Gerardine
anthonynorth said
Hi Gerardine,
Thanks for that. I hope you enjoy the rest 🙂
wordwand said
amazing stuff today.I’m really surprised at the amount of time brit famiies spend together; it’s really alarming.well done anthony.
Jane Doe said
Great Flash 55 and Unforgettable as well! Those were my favs, but it was all good. You always pick such interesting news pieces.
Have a great day!
anthonynorth said
Hi Wordwand,
Thanks for that. Yes, it isn’t much time is it?
Hi Jane Doe,
Many thanks. much appreciated.
william said
lol 49 mins together a week aint it sad, not like the old days family had dinner together every night, no tv, great post friend 🙂
anthonynorth said
Hi William,
Thanks for that. Yes, family meals were so important – and increasingly rare nowadays.
Pat said
Re MFM–The geneticist was looking in a mirror, so I assume he had the long ears?…Oooh…experiment gone horribly awry. Clever caption!
anthonynorth said
Hi Pat,
Thanks for that. And I’m sure they’ll get longer.
James said
•When the souls are connected with one another egoistically – for their own sake, they perceive this world.
•When the souls connect with one another for the sake of bestowal, then within that connection they reveal the spiritual world, the world to come.
•The life that we reveal within our egoistic connections with one another is referred to as our current material life.
•The life that we reveal within a proper connection with one another is referred to as the revelation of the Creator. We will feel the Upper Force, the Creator, the same way as we feel the air around us. He will connect us with all the other parts of the universe.
Therefore everything depends on our connection with one another – whether it is egoistic or for the sake of bestowal.
anthonynorth said
Hi James,
Yes, connection is vital, no matter what outlook on life you have.
Sylvia Kirkwood said
Oh, wonderful one! I love it, Anthony! Hope you have a great week!
Sylvia
anthonynorth said
Hi Sylvia,
Thanks for that. Glad you liked it.
Bill said
Great MfM, I wonder if the Scientists really know what is happening sometimes. You know what they say about Critters with Big Ears??
Dee said
great stuff Anthony!
I prefer gazing up at the universe with child-like wonder on starry nights – to trying to figure it all out.
totally agree about prisoners and the vote. I always thought you lost your rights once you were convicted. It would seem I am wrong.
I am staying away from that school – though I have seen a few students who may have been demons….
Peggy said
Anthony;
Loved your take on the the picture. I would wonder too, if I had huge ears!
Really enjoyed it.
shakira said
Hahahahaha…so true…SPOCK came to mind. LOL
well done, Anthony.
hugs
shakira
Monkey Man said
The science of the universe is quite interesting with all the theories of dark matter and dark energy and expansion fast or slowing down. It must be nice to get paid for offering up far flung ideas that can be neither proved nor disproved. Great read all the way round. Including your 55.
Carina said
You genuinely made me laugh out loud with your DVD mess. I love it!
Michael G-G said
And which of us, like your geneticist, has not made an ass of himself at one time or another? Splendid one, Anthony. I also liked your ghost teachers in Flash 55. And how can I be one of those 180 civil servants?
Thanks for all those interesting thoughts.
marja said
Indeed we don’t know much yet about the universe. Thinking about the universe and where it all ends is quite incrompehensive. I loved your unforgettable poem Original and funny
Thom said
LOL Wonder which X or Y Chromosome got mixed up 🙂 LOL. And your 55 is just excellent 🙂 Have a wonderful week ahead 🙂
Zephyr said
Hey AN, is this post a spook special or what? The School and Unforgettable reinforce the spook theme too.
Loved the Microfiction and the DVD mess!
If the Brit family spends 49 mins a week together, the average is not bound to differ too much in other countries either. It is indeed scary to think that the family is on the endangered list,so to speak!:(
anthonynorth said
Hi Bill,
I agree. The problem is they think they DO know – which is even scarier.
Hi Dee,
Thanks for that. Loved your comment about students and demons 🙂
Hi Peggy,
Many thanks. Much appreciated.
Hi Shakira,
Yes, and he was scary at times, too.
Hi Monkey Man,
I like the way you described the job. Nice one.
Hi Carina,
Thanks for that. Glad you liked it 🙂
Hi Michael,
Very true. Most of us have been there. And in the usual civil servant speak, I couldn’t possibly answer that 😉
Hi Marja,
Yes, I think the true reality of the universe will always evade us. And that’s a hope as well.
Hi Thom,
Thanks for the kind words. Much appreciated 🙂
Hi Zephyr,
Many thanks. I like to indulge in a bit of horror once a month. Keeps the cobwebs out of the mind. Yes, the family is increasingly endangered, and it’s wrong.
southlakesmom said
Oh those geneticists — they’re beginning to think they can explain EVERYTHING! But sometimes, a donkey is just a donkey!
anthonynorth said
Hi Southlakesmom,
You’ve certainly got that right 🙂
Nessa said
We were thinking along the same lines in our Microfiction.
anthonynorth said
Hi Nessa,
Ah, great minds, and all that 🙂
gautami tripathy said
Wonderful microfiction!
help me rewrite Greek tragedies
Twilight said
The universe, the Big Bang, singularity – and all that…..I somethimes wonder, AN, whether our universe (and there might be others too) is the remains of a former gigantically humungous body or world which blew up, our known universe being the bits and pieces of it. There will be other similar universes, from similar blow-outs, and maybe even some gigantic humungous worlds still around – somewhere. 😉 Basis for a sci-fi story? It’s probably been done already.
Mama Zen said
Only 49 minutes a week? And, we wonder why our kids have problems!
anthonynorth said
Hi Gautami,
Thanks for that. Much appreciated.
Hi Twilight,
I like that 🙂 I did do a story recently where the bits of the universe were part of a huge galactic body. Does that count?
Hi Mama Zen,
Yes, exactly.
Old Egg said
Horror DVDs do tend to go over the top. You will probably have to get the carpet cleaned now. It is finding out where the ghosts and ghouls have disappeared to that will be the problem.
Quilly said
Microfiction — lol! Proof his father was an ass!
55 — again, lol! Write that one and eclipse Rawlings in popularity.
anthonynorth said
Hi Old Egg,
Indeed so. I’m hoping they won’t start shaking the house.
Hi Quilly,
Thanks for that. I’ll do my best.
jabblog uk said
I read all your words, Anthony, and found myself nodding agreement again and again.
anthonynorth said
Hi Jabblog,
Thanks for that. It’s good to know.
Sylvia Kirkwood said
I do so agree with your statement here! “So maybe the true reality of the universe exists only in our collective minds.” Great post for the day/week!
You always give me something to think about, Anthony, and I do appreciate that. Hope you have a wonderful week!
Sylvia
PattiKen said
Great stuff, as usual. I especially love the unique approach to the boarding school. I’m sure the teachers were grateful to find meaningful work in the “near-after.”
Reader Wil said
OUBLIETTE : I saw one in the yard of a castle in France! How cruel man can be, but some people should deserve to be put in an oubliette and forgotten. However I am against capital punishment and this is capital punishment.
dustus said
Anthony, enjoying your writings. In particular, your style of short fiction is amazing. The stories about geneticist and the evangelist were my favorites. Also like the poem “Mess” very much. Thank You.
anthonynorth said
Hi Sylvia,
Many thanks for the kind words.
Hi PattiKen,
Thanks for that. Yes, it certainly beats hanging around haunting people at random.
Hi Reader Wil,
Yes, I’m against capital punishment, too. And they were frightening places.
Hi Dustus,
Thanks for that. Much appreciated.
Linda Goin said
oooh…remind me never to stalk you re: unforgettable!
Roger Green said
Actually, I’m comforted about how much we know we don’t know. Think about 5 or 6 centuries ago when we “knew” the sun revolved the earth. If that’s the case, then surely, we must be the only sentient beings in the universe. But, no, we go around the sun. There are billions of other planets going around millions and millions of stars, so the likelihood is that there IS life elsewhere, even though we have no way to discern for sure.
On behalf of the ABC Wednesday team, thank you! – ROG
Rinkly Report said
‘Unforgettable’ or ‘Universe’ …. both great ‘U’s. And I suppose the Universe IS Unforgettable, even if it’s completely Unfathomable!
naquillity said
nice post Anthony~ i especially liked the school and unforgettable. hope all is well.
Tumblewords said
Universe is a cogent look at known and unknown. Great short!
anthonynorth said
Hi Linda,
Oh, I’m a lovely chap really 🙂
Hi Roger,
This is only true to a point. I deal in so many fringe areas where science ‘knows’ it’s rubbish. A’ways dangerous.
Hi Rinkly Report,
Thanks for that. Much appreciated.
Hi Naquillity,
Many thanks for the kind words.
Hi Tumblewords,
It’s a subject very close to my heart.
Jay from The Depp Effect said
I’ve spent a lot of time over the years pondering the nature of the universe, and being alternately terrified and reassured by my conclusions. Ultimately, I can’t decide if we are parasites living in or on something so huge it’s imcomprehensible to us, or maybe Delenn from Babylon 5 was right; we are simply a manifestation of the universe, trying to figure itself out. LOL!
anthonynorth said
Hi Jay,
I think Delenn may be right. She was a clever Nimbari/Human hybrid.
Brenda Warren said
Regarding “Universe,” Yes! I love the idea of reality existing only in our collective experience. Ha! Put that in your test tubes and boil it. (sorry) I think science exists to eradicate magic. Remember the wonder of the world through a child’s eyes? Dandelion seeds scatter to the wind and mesmerize children. We grow up and poison dandelions, dang weeds. Thank you science for giving us the tools of our plunder.
Here I am ranting. Why? Because it’s summer, and I don’t have to be in school! Thanks for getting me thinking this morning Anthony. You rock.
anthonynorth said
Hi Brenda,
Thanks for that 🙂
Yes, science has taken so much of that wonder away from us. A great shame.
gautami tripathy said
Mess hits it right into the head!
the anguish of anger
anthonynorth said
Hi Gautami,
Yep, that’s how I see it.
shakira said
I love you The Noble Undead and especially UNFORGETTABLE. truly is it..bravo!
hugs
shakira
Me a writer? said
Looks like he has the short straw. Yes I know it’s Wednesday but my employer unreasonably expected me to work on Monday and Tuesday so no time free except to sleep and even that down to 5-6 hours! Inspired by Shakespeare this week. My Micro Story
anthonynorth said
Hi Shakira,
Many thanks for those kind words. Much appreciated.
Hi Me A Writer,
These employers just don’t know how important blogging is, do they?
Thursday Poets Rally Week 22 (June 10-16, 2010) « Jingle said
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Lilibeth said
Kneejerk law is usually bad law. You’re perceptive. I’m not so sure that old Bram wouldn’t shiver if he thought his masterpiece was inspired by a quietly-whispering undead. he he.
wordwand said
hi anthony, I’ll be glad to have you read my poem here http://wordwand.wordpress.com/
unprecedentedintellectual said
you are like a commercial break that i actually enjoy in the middle of my day
unprecedentedintellectual said
I especially like the voting criminals dilemma.
anthonynorth said
Hi Lilibeth,
Yes, I think he might be worried by that 😉
Hi Wordwand,
I’ll be along.
Hi Unprecedentedintellectual,
Thanks for that, and welcome.
suzicate said
Your microfiction gave me such a chuckle I had a hard time being serious to read your poem and by the time I got to the end of your post, I was still chuckling at the first one…I just can’t stay focused!!!
brian said
dontdy…lol. smart authorities for once…happy tt!
anthonynorth said
Hi Suzicate,
Thanks for that. I can see I’ll have to put the chuckle at the end 🙂
Hi Brian,
Yes, indeed – with or without the apostrophe.
Kris said
There is a lot on!
TD said
I continue to enjoy your philosophical musings the most. How little we know about the universe. About the ocean. About the mind. And how much so many purport to know. I’ll stick with Socrates. I can claim only to know that I know very little.
curtisbell said
How macrocosmic. Great job!
soulintention: signed .............bkm said
You have outdid yourself Anthony, a most enjoyable read…..indeed… loved the microfiction…..all a pleasure…..bkm
anthonynorth said
Hi Kris,
Yes, but they’re all short and you can choose between current affairs or fiction/poetry. Doing that, it’s down to a couple of hundred words – an average post length.
Hi TD,
Thanks for that, and I think you’ve got it about right.
Hi Curtisbell,
Many thanks. Much appreciated.
Hi Bkm,
Many thanks for those kind words.
Gaurav Sharma said
Nice works……use of such beautiful words is really inspiring .Learnt alot
anthonynorth said
Hi Gaurav Sharma,
Thanks for that. much appreciated.
sandy said
oubliette did it happen to you ?
anthonynorth said
Hi Sandy,
Ah, totally make believe – although a psychological process I think many go through.
Jay Thurston said
The Noble Undead – Inspiration to write comes in many forms. I never considered possessions though. Very creative little piece.
Mess – Enjoyed the humorous end. I do hope the Horror DVDs are ok.
Adelle Laudan said
As usual some great food for thought. Thanks Anthony.
Carina said
I like the idea of the undead rediscovering their entrance to humanity through words. Well, as an idea you understand. Not because I particularly want to be reintroduced to the undead!
trisha said
Unforgettable – that’s her song,
She obviously thought we belonged,
Followed me everywhere I went,
Eventually my anger I had to vent,
I lie awake, now, most of the time,
Trying to hear that damn clock chime,
How she died – such a fright,
Now she sings that song all night
just awesome 🙂
shyam said
hahaha… I totally loved your microfiction! 🙂
anthonynorth said
Hi Jay,
Thanks for that. Yes, the DVDs are okay, and thriving thanks to Stoker 😉
Hi Adelle,
Many thanks. Much appreciated.
Hi Carina,
Ah, that’s the beauty of fiction. It’s unde… – I mean, unreal 🙂
Hi Trisha,
Many thanks for the kind words.
Hi Shyam,
Thanks for that, and welcome.
Brenda said
Hmmm. 180? That many civil servants make more than the Prime Minister? Very sad, but I bet all governments have that kind of stuff going around. Makes me want check out the Tea Party movements in my own area.
anthonynorth said
Hi Brenda,
I know the feeling.
Alice Audrey said
Actually, in practical terms, the universe really does only exist in our collective minds. After all, which of us will go off past Pluto and return to describe it?
anthonynorth said
Hi Alice,
Very true – even though many scientists think differently.
Jingle said
love your take on theme Thursday…
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anthonynorth said
Hi Jingle,
Thanks for that. Much appreciated.
betsy said
Candy…haha…no matter what you call it, people will eat it. 🙂
anthonynorth said
Hi Betsy,
Yes, they certainly will.
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lissa said
UNFORGETTABLE – like this one, it was fun to read
Shelley Munro said
The one about the mirror made me chuckle. I’ve been there…
I have to agree about prisoners not having a vote. They’re there in punishment. Voting is one right they should lose.
anthonynorth said
Hi Jingle,
Thanks for that.
Hi Lissa,
Many thanks. Glad you liked it.
Hi Shelley,
Many thanks. Yes, punishment should be punishment.
Eaton Bennett said
A strange school indeed, very well suited to a 55! Have a great weekend and week. 🙂
anthonynorth said
Hi Eaton,
Thanks for that. Yes, not a school I’d have liked to go to 🙂
Hootin' Anni said
Hi Anthony…I haven’t been here to visit you in I don’t know HOW long!!! Your 55 is eerie…with a SCI-FI flair…I love it. You never cease to show how talented you are with your thoughts written.
Here As always scroll down below my Friday Show N Tell. Have a great weekend!!!
anthonynorth said
Hi Hootin’ Anni,
Thanks for that and it’s good to see you back.
brian said
yeah, i might stay in bed too. smiles. nice 55.
Nessa said
That’s sure is a wonderful ghostly teacher roster in your school. The next Harry Potter movie comes out in November.
D.S. Lear said
loved it all but the microfiction..that one produced a much need laugh!
G-Man said
Tony…
You have take on life thats marvelous.
Many of us feel exactly as you do, but you happen to put your musings down on paper much more succinctly.
Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and please have a Kick Ass Week-End…G
anthonynorth said
Hi Brian,
A good place to be – especially there 🙂
Hi Nessa,
Thanks for that. Yes, and not many to go now.
Hi D S Lear,
Many thanks. I always try to inject a littler humour.
Hi G-Man,
Many thanks for the kind words.
Alice Audrey said
It’s a Harry Potter 55. Well, except the kids don’t stay in bed there.
anthonynorth said
Hi Alice,
Quite true. These little kiddies do exactly as they’re told 😉
Akelamalu said
Not quite Hogwarts the school in your 55 but very nearly. 🙂
Me a writer? said
Clever one. I like a teacher with spirit. Hammer Horror for me today. My 55
anthonynorth said
Hi Akelamalu,
Yes, a close parallel 🙂
Hi John,
Many thanks. I love those old Hammer films.
Dee said
Tony, I loved your take on the Noble Undead – What a cool way to think of Bram Stoker writing!
moondustwriter said
Loved your Flash 55 – I wonder if that’s where alot of head masters get their teachers (or warm bodies)
Candy is always to blame!!!
Thanks Anthony for encouraging so many of us
anthonynorth said
Hi Dee,
Thanks for that. Glad you liked it.
Hi Moondustwriter,
Many thanks. Much appreciated.
shakira said
Your 55 is very powerful…
you are truly a master with words!
hugs
shakira
anthonynorth said
Hi Shakira,
Many thanks for the kind words.
SandyCarlson said
Love what you did with oubliette, Anthony. Thanks.
dancingfreak said
hmmmm… science… i’m no good at it.
but this was interesting 🙂
anthonynorth said
Hi Sandy,
Thanks for that. Much appreciated.
Hi Dancingfreak,
Many thanks for the comment.
Amity said
what could that be Anthony? the one you pushed down the pit and afraid to take a look lest you’d see a skeleton…hmmm…let me just guess…:)
thanks for your constant support in my blog…i appreciate it very much!
anthonynorth said
Hi Amity,
Ah, his name is metaphor 🙂
Amity said
Now I know…:) Thanks Anthony…:)
Sweetest in the Gale said
I loved your take on “oubliette”…very cleverly done! And “The School” also gave me a shiver…
Ramesh sood said
Responding to your take n the prompt..
Good to leave the skeletons there.. but haven’t you remembered them here today..well, wash your head off them..
anthonynorth said
Hi Sweetest In The Gale,
Thanks for that. Much appreciated.
Hi Ramesh Sood,
You could certainly say that 🙂
shraddha said
that is very nice take on oubliette…such a hard word..
anthonynorth said
Hi Shraddha,
Thanks for that. Much appreciated.
The Thirteenth Crossing said
Your theme Thursday is infinitely better than mine. I loved it.
55 Flash Fiction Friday: Two Ships Passing In The Night
anthonynorth said
Hi The Thirteenth Crossing,
Thanks for that. Much appreciated.
Tumblewords said
Spooky oubliette! I remember seeing the ‘blood runnels’ in European castles sometime back and shuddering. Cold dark places. But I didn’t see any eye sockets. 🙂
anthonynorth said
Hi Tumblewords,
Ah, the eye sockets were a necessary Poeism 😉
Comedy Plus said
Loved the Universe piece. I’d not thought of it like that, but I think you are right. I doubt we’ll ever know very much. We are just a speck in the great big universe.
Have a terrific day. 🙂
anthonynorth said
Hi Sandee,
Thanks for that. Much appreciated.
Jim said
This is the third time lately that I’ve run across the theme, “I daren’t go and look – his eye sockets will stare.”
The first involved locking a co-tennant in a staircase in a novel, ‘Drood,’ by Dan Simmons, and next a little girl locked her little brother in an obscure pantry in ‘Sarah’s Key’ by Tatiana de Rosnay. Now your very nice poem.
..
anthonynorth said
Hi Jim,
Thanks for that. It must be a running theme 🙂