A bit of entertainment today, I think – at least, I hope it’s entertaining. I’ve written hundreds of short stories over the years, dozens of which were published in the UK small press in the 1990s. This tale, of how easily a society can be corrupted, just missed these glory years, so is published, here, for the first time.
I had been in heaven for several eternities before it happened. Although the word, eternity, is perhaps not the best way to describe life up here. It is suggestive of age-old boredom, when, infact, heaven is anything but boring. You meet so many people; and the infinite possibilities within the simple act of greeting make boredom an impossibility.
Perhaps it is the new emphasis upon expectation that makes heaven the Paradise it is. I remember well when I was mortal, the time when intellectual capacity was far in excess of the life span available to realise it. Rushing here, rushing there, wanting this, wanting that ..
No time. That was the problem. But here .. ? Before …
I was walking past the gates to say hello to old Mrs Grimes when he arrived.
Two things struck me as most peculiar about the incident that followed. The former was Old Pete’s uncertainty at the presence; the latter, the presence itself.
He was a youngish man, hardly past his teens. His hair was blonde and I suppose he could have been a handsome youth if not for the scar across his cheek. He was of average height yet slight, almost undernourished, and a fire seemed to burn in his cold, blue eyes.
‘And what do you want?’ asked Old Pete, worrying his long, white beard.
The youth had been sauntering up the path, his feet fitting unhealthily into what I later found out were called ‘Trainers.’ As with his footwear, the rest of his clothes were unusual – jeans and baggy shirt, I’m told – and he wore a cloth hat called a baseball cap on his head, screwed the wrong way round.
‘What’cha, grandad,’ said the youth, coming to a halt. ‘Gimme a ticket.’
At that he raised an opened can of what I later identified as a drink called Coke. He guzzled thirstily, finally offering a burp.
‘A ticket?’ asked Old Pete, bemused.
‘Yea, a ticket. How else am I gonna get in?’
Old Pete stepped back, appraising the youth before him. ‘Excuse me,’ he finally said, ‘but are you sure you’re in the right place?’
‘That weird fella with the wings told me to come ‘ere – man, I loved his style.’ This statement gained emphasis with a stamp of the foot and a pirouette.
‘Well, I am sorry, young man, but I don’t think you are.’
‘God Almighty,’ replied the youth, ‘this is as bad as social services. Come ‘ere, go there, not ‘ere … man, it drives us mad.’
Old Pete blushed at the blasphemy, attempting to hush the youth with a finger to his mouth. Then: ‘But have you lived a virtuous life?’
‘What’cha mean, Pops?’
‘Have you always lived your life caringly?’
‘Oh, I get it. Used condoms, you mean.’
‘Not exactly,’ said Old Pete, shaking his head.
‘Well, can I come in or what?’
Old Pete contemplated the issue at hand. Being in heaven for quite a while, I knew the difficulties facing him. Heaven was an orderly place for orderly, God-loving folks. There were often complaints from downstairs that we had a far too exclusive preserve. ‘Politics of envy,’ Old Pete used to say, being philosophical concerning matters spiritual.
But soon I realised that Old Pete couldn’t just dismiss the youth, as he had been guided to heaven by an angel. Perhaps God was changing the policy – moving to the Left?
‘One moment,’ Old Pete finally said. He hobbled over to the celestial PC and tabbed in for the Menu of that day’s deaths. He soon found the youth’s demise. Gratified, he hobbled back to the gate, opened it and let the youth enter.
As he sauntered up the road, I approached Old Pete and said: ‘Was that wise?’
Old Pete said: ‘I’m afraid I had no choice. Most of his life the youth has been anything but Godly, but this morning he was walking down the road when he saw a truck going out of control. Driver had imbibed too much of the beverage that is called alcohol and was drunk. At the time, a school party was crossing the road, the truck heading straight for them. Using his initiative, the youth jumped at the truck, managed to open the door, push the drunken driver to one side, and steered the vehicle away from the children before crashing into an empty shop. Basically, he sacrificed himself so that others could live. ‘
‘A noble act,’ I agreed. However, later that day I was walking to afternoon prayer when I noticed a small group of people congregating near a bush. Intrigued, I approached.
‘What is it?’ I asked, noticing the concern on their faces. Mrs Grimes pointed it out to me. ‘Look,’ she said, pointing at the ground.
Turning my attention as directed, I noticed the empty can of Coke lying close to the bush. ‘Oh dear,’ I said, soon becoming as disturbed as the others.
At that moment the youth approached. Seeing him, I called him over and said: ‘Excuse me, young man, but would you mind picking that up?’
The youth stood silent for a moment. Then, raising a stiffly held finger, he said: ‘Stuff you,’ and walked off.
The people continued to watch the can, concern showing on their faces. What was to be done, I thought.
What indeed. Options, you see, were few. For being heaven – perfect and all that – contingency plans for anything but perfect behaviour were unknown. Even God – who was consulted some two days after the depositing of the can – was bemused, mumbling about plagues, famines and even floods being inadequate to put a stop to human anarchistic behaviour, once broken out.
Heaven, it soon became apparent, was in turmoil.
And thus would have been our lot if not for the sudden, miraculous intervention of Jesus, who, passing by one day, spied the can, picked it up and popped it over a cloud.
Where the can went, no one up here knows. You, good reader, may know different. It could be in your garden at this very moment.
As for heaven, normality, of sorts, returned. Although I do wish Mrs Grimes wouldn’t be quite so eloquent with her greetings nowadays. Only this morning my ‘hello’ was greeted with a prone finger and resonant ‘stuff you.’
Perhaps God was right, once again.
(c) Anthony North
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